šŸ›Žļø The Caption Formula Your Hospitality Brand Needs

6 smart strategies to write better captions for your next social media post.

Ever stared at the caption box and felt like your brain just… powered down? šŸ˜… You’ve got the perfect post. The perfect photo. Maybe even the perfect trending sound. But now it’s just you… and that blinking cursor. What do you write?

A strong caption doesn’t just increase engagement—it increases brand recognition and the chance to get bookings.

In today’s newsletter, I’m sharing six practical tips to help you write better captions—plus a prompt you can use with AI to keep improving your writing skills.

Grab your coffee, and let’s dive in! ā˜•ļø

6 Tips for Better Captions ā¤µļø

1ļøāƒ£ Write like you're speaking to someone specific

Not everyone’s brand voice is casual, and that’s OK. You don’t need to sound like you’re texting your BFF if your brand is more luxury and polished. But whoever your tone leans toward, write to one person.


Not the crowd. Not ā€œguestsā€ in general. Just one ideal guest—and let your voice come through. Even the most upscale brands can afford to be a little more real online.

2ļøāƒ£ Use a solid structure every time

If you struggle with captions, give yourself a formula:
Hook āž”ļø Body āž”ļø CTA

  • The hook is what makes someone stop and click ā€œread more.ā€

  • The body gives value: tell a story, share an update, highlight a feature.

  • And always end with a call to action—even if it’s as simple as ā€œTag someone you’d bring here!ā€ or ā€œSave this for your next trip.ā€

This structure gives your captions flow—and your audience direction.

3ļøāƒ£ Steal like a caption artist

Inspiration is everywhere—if you’re paying attention. Any time you read a caption all the way to the end, ask yourself why. What made it click? What made you care?

Then—save it! Create a folder in Instagram and name it something like ā€œcaption inspoā€ or ā€œposts that worked.ā€ This doesn’t have to be just hospitality-related either. You can pull from fashion, fitness, parenting blogs, foodies, and even meme accounts.

Over time, you’ll build a little swipe file of writing patterns, tones, and hooks that resonate with you. And if they resonate with you, chances are they’ll resonate with your guests too.

4ļøāƒ£ Don’t underestimate the caption

Look, visuals are crucial—but they can’t always carry the whole weight of your post. Captions are your chance to add emotion, energy, or explanation to what’s already on screen.

You don’t have to write a novel (please don’t šŸ˜…), but try not to always default to one-liners. When you do go short, make it intentional. It should either be highly relatable, super shareable, or spark a conversation.

If the image does all the storytelling, the caption should still give the audience something to do—whether that’s tagging a friend, clicking the link in bio, or saving the post for later.

Lazy captions? They're a missed opportunity. And you’re better than that.

5ļøāƒ£ Analyze your work

I know. You don’t want to hear this. Analyzing is… not the most fun part.

But every brand is a bit different—so while general tips help, your own data is the gold mine. Go back over your last few months of posts and look for patterns.

Which captions got the most comments, saves, shares, or reach? Did they include questions, personal stories, calls to action? Were they longer or short and snappy?

Try to pull 2–3 lessons from your top performers. Then test those elements again. Caption writing isn’t just a creative task—it’s a skill you build by tweaking and testing. If something worked once, it might work again (with a new twist).

6ļøāƒ£ Use AI (for feedback, not for writing)

You don’t need AI to write like you. You already know your brand best. But you can use AI to make your captions sharper.

Here’s how: write your caption, then ask ChatGPT (or Claude, or any tool you like) to review it like a professional Instagram copywriter. Ask for constructive, specific feedback—not just praise. Then take it one step further: have the AI step into the shoes of your ideal guest and tell you how they’d feel reading it.

It’s like having a writing coach and a guest persona in one.

šŸ“² AI Prompt to Copy and Paste:

You are a professional Instagram copywriter and hospitality marketing expert. I’m going to share a caption I wrote. Please give me honest, constructive feedback on how to improve it—tone, clarity, engagement, structure.

Then, pretend you are my ideal guest (which is [insert description—ex: a 30-something creative couple from NYC looking for romantic weekend getaways]) and explain how this caption would land for them.

šŸ”‘ Key Takeaways

  • A strong caption keeps guests in your zone of influence—and that’s where the magic happens.

  • Stick to a clear structure: Hook → Body → CTA.

  • Inspiration is everywhere—build your swipe file and learn from it.

  • Don’t skip the caption—it’s not just decoration. It’s persuasion.

  • AI is a great coach—but you are the writer.

āœ… Three Things You Can Do Right Now

1ļøāƒ£ Save three captions from your Instagram scroll today that made you stop and read.


2ļøāƒ£ Rewrite one of your old posts using the hook/body/CTA format. Doesn’t that look so much better?


3ļøāƒ£ Try the AI prompt above when writing your next caption. If you feel like you’re not getting the right feedback yet, tweak the prompt or keep digging until you do.

🚨 Do you need help?

Hit the button below and send me one of your recent captions on Instagram—I’ll give you direct feedback or ideas on how to improve it. Let’s work on this together.

See you next week,

Caroline šŸ‘‹