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šļø The Caption Formula Your Hospitality Brand Needs
6 smart strategies to write better captions for your next social media post.
Ever stared at the caption box and felt like your brain just⦠powered down? š Youāve got the perfect post. The perfect photo. Maybe even the perfect trending sound. But now itās just you⦠and that blinking cursor. What do you write?
A strong caption doesnāt just increase engagementāit increases brand recognition and the chance to get bookings.
In todayās newsletter, Iām sharing six practical tips to help you write better captionsāplus a prompt you can use with AI to keep improving your writing skills.
Grab your coffee, and letās dive in! āļø
Table of Contents
6 Tips for Better Captions ⤵ļø
1ļøā£ Write like you're speaking to someone specific
Not everyoneās brand voice is casual, and thatās OK. You donāt need to sound like youāre texting your BFF if your brand is more luxury and polished. But whoever your tone leans toward, write to one person.
Not the crowd. Not āguestsā in general. Just one ideal guestāand let your voice come through. Even the most upscale brands can afford to be a little more real online.
2ļøā£ Use a solid structure every time
If you struggle with captions, give yourself a formula:
Hook ā”ļø Body ā”ļø CTA
The hook is what makes someone stop and click āread more.ā
The body gives value: tell a story, share an update, highlight a feature.
And always end with a call to actionāeven if itās as simple as āTag someone youād bring here!ā or āSave this for your next trip.ā
This structure gives your captions flowāand your audience direction.
3ļøā£ Steal like a caption artist
Inspiration is everywhereāif youāre paying attention. Any time you read a caption all the way to the end, ask yourself why. What made it click? What made you care?
Thenāsave it! Create a folder in Instagram and name it something like ācaption inspoā or āposts that worked.ā This doesnāt have to be just hospitality-related either. You can pull from fashion, fitness, parenting blogs, foodies, and even meme accounts.
Over time, youāll build a little swipe file of writing patterns, tones, and hooks that resonate with you. And if they resonate with you, chances are theyāll resonate with your guests too.
4ļøā£ Donāt underestimate the caption
Look, visuals are crucialābut they canāt always carry the whole weight of your post. Captions are your chance to add emotion, energy, or explanation to whatās already on screen.
You donāt have to write a novel (please donāt š ), but try not to always default to one-liners. When you do go short, make it intentional. It should either be highly relatable, super shareable, or spark a conversation.
If the image does all the storytelling, the caption should still give the audience something to doāwhether thatās tagging a friend, clicking the link in bio, or saving the post for later.
Lazy captions? They're a missed opportunity. And youāre better than that.
5ļøā£ Analyze your work
I know. You donāt want to hear this. Analyzing is⦠not the most fun part.
But every brand is a bit differentāso while general tips help, your own data is the gold mine. Go back over your last few months of posts and look for patterns.
Which captions got the most comments, saves, shares, or reach? Did they include questions, personal stories, calls to action? Were they longer or short and snappy?
Try to pull 2ā3 lessons from your top performers. Then test those elements again. Caption writing isnāt just a creative taskāitās a skill you build by tweaking and testing. If something worked once, it might work again (with a new twist).
6ļøā£ Use AI (for feedback, not for writing)
You donāt need AI to write like you. You already know your brand best. But you can use AI to make your captions sharper.
Hereās how: write your caption, then ask ChatGPT (or Claude, or any tool you like) to review it like a professional Instagram copywriter. Ask for constructive, specific feedbackānot just praise. Then take it one step further: have the AI step into the shoes of your ideal guest and tell you how theyād feel reading it.
Itās like having a writing coach and a guest persona in one.
š² AI Prompt to Copy and Paste:
You are a professional Instagram copywriter and hospitality marketing expert. Iām going to share a caption I wrote. Please give me honest, constructive feedback on how to improve itātone, clarity, engagement, structure.
Then, pretend you are my ideal guest (which is [insert descriptionāex: a 30-something creative couple from NYC looking for romantic weekend getaways]) and explain how this caption would land for them.
š Key Takeaways
A strong caption keeps guests in your zone of influenceāand thatās where the magic happens.
Stick to a clear structure: Hook ā Body ā CTA.
Inspiration is everywhereābuild your swipe file and learn from it.
Donāt skip the captionāitās not just decoration. Itās persuasion.
AI is a great coachābut you are the writer.
ā Three Things You Can Do Right Now
1ļøā£ Save three captions from your Instagram scroll today that made you stop and read.
2ļøā£ Rewrite one of your old posts using the hook/body/CTA format. Doesnāt that look so much better?
3ļøā£ Try the AI prompt above when writing your next caption. If you feel like youāre not getting the right feedback yet, tweak the prompt or keep digging until you do.